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Monday, 29 March 2021

Writing story task



(introduction) It was june the 7th 1996. There have been reports of a large left over from an unknown creature. A special operation group and a couple of scientists were sent to the area where it was first spotted. “C’mon get us there already” the leader of the team said to the pilot. His name is Captain burns. He doesn’t have that much patience sometimes but he's good at taking charge and leading people. He has a scare on his face, but no one knows how he got it. People say him and his old fire team were attacked by a pack of tigers in a jungle when they were sleeping rumours say him and 1 other dude survived. But let me introduce myself before continuing the story. My name is Nate pierce. Being in the military runs in the family for me. The 3 other guys in my team are my buds, We've been friends since we all enlisted in the military in 1991. There is doug. Doug is our heavy soldier who carries his own heavy equipment, like a grenade launcher to a LMG (light machine gun). Then there's jacob. He's our stealthy kinda guy you know. Our sniper and watcher. And lastly there's Richard. He's our support and medic. He carries all the equipment we need if we get wounded and if we run out of ammo.

(arriving at the location) 2 hours past and we finally arrived at the location where the large boney carcass of a creature was spotted. Once the team and the scientist landed we were told that there might be some hostiles coming for the dead creatures' remains. Me and the captain walked around to check if nobody who wasn’t authorised to come was around. The others took a long look at the larger creature's remains. Doug seemed quite shakened that there might be something that large on this earth. The creature remains the size of over 100 Boeing B-52H bombers. The scientist started exploring. Doug and captain Burns started exploring with them, me, jacob and richard stayed behind to keep an eye out. An 1 hour has passed and Doug, captain burns and the scientist group hasn’t come back yet. (meanwhile) “this place his hella big’ said doug. Captain Burns took a look at him, he still seemed a bit shaken by the fact there might be another of these creatures around the world. Captain Burns put his hand on Doug's shoulder and said “calm down i doubt there might be another of these things” there were inside of the bones and there was enough room to fit a tank in here. Then they heard a loud echo in front of them. Captain Burns and Doug stood in front of the scientist. They pointed a flash light then they saw a small looking creature. They saw 1 then 2 then 3 and then more than 40 of them popped out.

(Being attacked) more and more of those creatures started popping up. A second later Captain burns shouted “RUN!” doug and the scientist started running. The small creatures started chasing them there were on top of them on the walls next to them. They had sharp claws and small spikey teeth. Doug stopped for a moment then started shooting grenades at the swarm. So did the captain burns. The scientist kept on running, it was gonna take them a while to get out of there since they traveled so far. 5 minutes have passed of running captain burns and Doug caught up to the scientist. One of the scientists saw something gooey on doug. He asked “WHAT’S THAT ON YOUR SHOULDER”. Before Doug could reply Captain Burns said “IT’S ACID”, Scientist: “ACID?”, Captain Burns: “YES ACID, THOSE THINGS CAN SPIT ACID”. They both took a look at Doug and it looked like he was about to pass out. Seconds later Doug fell to the floor, “It must be the acid” Captain burn said. Captain Burns and one of the scientists lifted up Doug and carried him. Another scientist said that they could see light. A minute passed and they made it out of the creature's remains. The second Richard saw captain burns and the scientist lay Doug down on the ground he rushed over there.

(The attack aftermath) Richard starts doing medical persegers on Doug “HE GOT POISONED AND HIS PULSE is SLOWING DOWN” he yelled. “What can I do to help?” i said, Richard replied with “GO TO THE TENT AND FIND THE BLUE BOX”. I ran to the tent and grabbed the blue box, I rushed out of there and gave it to richard. He got out something that can slow down the poison inside of someone. He applied it to Doug (1 hour later) Richard came out of the tent and said “Doug will survive, but he wont wake up for a while”, Later Richard called a helicopter to come and pick him up. a few more minutes had passed and the helicopter came to pick Doug up and transport him to a hospital. Meanwhile the rest of us had to stay back and continue with the mission. Moments later there was unexplained screaming the fire team went to check it out and out came all those little creatures and that was all the information we knew about what happened to that fire team. Ever since people named the left over of the creature, Mandela






this is the picture i used to write my story, hope you enjoy

Introduction letter


Hello, My name is Valeli and I am Samoan. I am very excited for school in 2021 and getting to do fun stuff.

I was born in wellington but moved to Auckland when i was 6. The first school I attended in Auckland was Wakaaranga primary school for 1 year then i went to Pt England primary school.

I live in a family of 6 but 4 more of my relatives moved in. I am the second oldest child and my sister is the first. My 4 relatives that moved in with my family from Samoa there are my uncles and auntie and my grandpa. My mum and dad also was born in Samoa but moved to New Zealand

The thing that i accomplished in life is facing my fear of heights at camp Benson. I was tied to a rope and i had to climb up this wall and then slowly come down i kept on looking at the ground and i started getting more nervous but i kept my mind open, looked up into the sky then slowly came down

I love to chill and listen to music on my own. The type of music i like to listen to is Hip hip, RnB and the type of music to sit back and relax to. I enjoy playing sports like soccer and basketball. I also like to watch youtube videos and anime. My favourite anime to watch is Dragon ball, Attack on titan, demon slayer and My hero academia. I enjoy spending time with my family and friends.

I am very excited to be at school this year and hope it will be a good one. I will try my best to get good grades and make my teachers proud and hope the year goes well for y'all.





this is my introduction letter, all about me

Tuesday, 17 September 2019

stranded


One morning, my crew and I went to our v22 Osprey plane and our pilot was waiting there. We took off into the sky and four more v22 Osprey came with us and 11 black-hawks too. When we were flying we were ambushed by fighter jets. The black-hawks took fire but it wasn't enough the black-hawks burst into flames and went crashing down. Our pilot tried retreating but we had to get past the explosion. Our pilot said we were going down.


 When I woke up our v22 Osprey had crash landed on an island. I woke up my crew TJ JERMAINE AND LORENZO. I told them to help the pilot get out but he never made it he was dead. So we got our guns and ammo and gear I said this was a big island. I heard Russian people talking they were searching for us they had planes tanks and helicopters. Then I thought we will never make it out. But TJ had a plan he said we should take them out one by one but Jermaine said that will take like a month to do that. We shot at the two Russia soldiers they went down and we needed to plan what to do next.

We found a map in one of the Russian’s hands and we checked the map. It said we had crash landed at a Russian base. It showed where they keep all of there helicopters it,s at the far north of the island. So me and my crew travel to the far end of the island trying not to be spotted. After a long journey we made it there.



Once my crew and I got there we ran for the helicopter but then we got caught. A bunch of soldiers came and trapped us. They locked us in a cage and we felt all hope was lost. But then we heard gunshots. It was the NZ army. They came to rescue us was what we had hoped. 


They came in and blew up the cage and we escaped in a v22 Osprey. Battleships fighter jets were blowing up the Russian base with everything they. owned Then the battle ships and planes travelled back to NZ where we would be safe. We were so lucky we were flying in a new v280 valor to safety. 


V22 0sprey
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V280 valor
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Wednesday, 20 March 2019

camp writing.


The year 5 and 6 were going to camp. And it was camp week. On week Wednesday 6th march to Friday 8th march. It was in pt England field. The year 5 and 6 were going to camp. And it was camp week. On week 5 - Wednesday 6th march to Friday 8th march. It was in pt England field. My favourite thing about camp was on Monday at night we watch a movie called small foot at was a funny movie. At camp I like the way they made the dinner and desert. And I was happy when my group get to find out where are tents are when I found my one it turned out the I was sleeping with my friend. When we first went inside are tent it was hot as. It felt like I couldn't breathe in there. I what to say thanks to MR Burt. I will like to say thanks to the people how made dinner and desert and breakfast. And say thanks to the parent helpers. And thanks to how made this happen. And to the camp leaders. I leader to make new friend. Because if you go to camp you will have lost and lost of fun.                  




This is my camp writing for today and I was write about my day at camp. I had write about what I did on camp like the activity and the food and tenting. if you don't know what's tenting is it's where you have to find your tent and tent buddy. 

Wednesday, 24 October 2018

recount writing


two weeks ago I went to burger king for my birthday. My mum got me a crown on my birthday. When we left burger king I went to get a nether refill then I went back in the car. When we left we went to the warehouse. My mum let me get three things so I got m&m then I got the m&m block and then I got a new t-shirt. Then we went back home and watch a movie called white house down it was a action movie. It’s about these people trying to takeover the white house and the army was trying to save it. Also they are trying to save the President that’s inside the white house with his agent trying to get out with him.

Thursday, 18 October 2018

surprised recount



On Sunday I went to church for white Sunday. With my family it was fun but then I got nervous when me and my friends had to stand on the stage and do a dance. When I was dancing my hands started to get sweaty but when I finish the dance I felt surprised it was finish. When church was finish we went to eat chicken nibbles and chips it was so yum. When we were dun eating my whole church went to mission bay. It was so fun because all of the kids get to swim also I get to swim too. It was fun day playing in the water I felt really really happy about it. On that day I was nervous but it ended with a happy day at the beach.




Thursday, 6 September 2018

animation writing.



Hi my name is Valeli and this is my move ya body animation. In my animation I am doing rugby. If you want to score a try you have to bup off somebody to reach the try line. If someone on the other team has the ball you have to tackle them on the ground no matter want. thank you for watching.

Friday, 17 August 2018

narrative writing



2’000 years ago there was a war in china called dragon wars but now it’s 2018 they weight 2’000 years for us so they came to point England school. we had 18 more years to pepper. Now it was time the dragons raised from the dead. One day later there was this boy named ark he holds the key to ultimate sakerfes. Next day later there was a war at point England school and point England beach it was the biggest war ever ark was running for his life a boat was gonna pick him up but then it got burn from the dragons fireball. Then he saw the dragon knights marching up to him and in a blec of a eye they fire the biggest fireballs at the NZ army. Ark has to get the Cube to the temple before time runs out. But there was a problem it was in a atheir world. Ark has to be transport to the FBI and the NCIA and the agent spy group. But they been attack from the dragons. Ark got drag in from the knights. He was tied up onto the pol he was wearing a diamond on his neck. It brag some lighting to break the rops. Ark ran to the portill to get back to his world.When he came back to the USA know one was there they were all gone he saw 20 dragons flying around him so he went and to hid. When it was morning the towers was destroyed and the white house was still standing and there was agents outside. The rescue team was looking for ENE one that was still alive in the city. And ENE people that was in the war that was still alive too. Then he saw some cops walking around the city with their guns loaded ready. The cops saw him and took him to a safe place to picket him from the fire breathing dragons. But they found where he was saw they ran to safety. Then they saw the good snake came then it transforms into a big dragon. Then somehow they got to the city again the army started firing missile at them so the run somewhere safe but the snake started fighting back. But then a purtill thase came up in the sky and a big Gorilla came out and started fight the helicopter and smashing it on the ground. Every year new 4 monsters cem on coming out of purtill the humans won the battle in 2099. But then ark died when the war was finish. The future robots pick up the dead monsters but one more purtill came up but it was not like the atheir purtill this one is so big it’s bigger than a city it’s name was Godzilla. it ran to the water where now one can find him. All of the dead monsters got frown in the sea. Then this new guy was the person holds the key to ultimate sakerfes name sam he goes to high school. To be Continue.

Thursday, 9 August 2018

Wednesday, 27 June 2018

skydiving





4 months ago I had to jump out of the plane. and go skydiving. when we were on the plane I look down and we were on top of the clouds. when I jump out of the plane I felt very very nervous. it felt like the wind is going around my body it felt like a cold shower. when I went through the clouds it felt like candy floss. it’s like I was like a bird when I pull up my parachute. it look like I was gonna hit a rock. then a bird made a hole through my parachute and I was going down fast. I nelly hit a rock then I saw the landing place then I did a lope lop in the sky. then I landed on my feet then I roll over then I hit a gat. but I did not break a bone. 2 years later that was the Scariest day in my life. But it was fun doing it with my friends. The end.






Friday, 22 June 2018

animation writing

Hi my name is valeli When my helicopter when it was flying there was a explosion in the sky so they went to check it out. then they were under attack his team were all dying then there were was only two that survived. when one helicopter moved forwards it explosiones because a millsel fired at him and when I look down and the bash was on fire then three big planes come to get me to safede. Now I will talk about the four forces of flight. Lift makes the plane go up when it’s getting too close to the ground. Weight  makes the plane go down when the plane is getting high in the sky. Drag makes the plane go left and right if it’s gonna hit a tree a mountain or a big rock. Thrust makes the plane go forward and also thrust is more stronger than drag because it has more power. Thanks for watching my movie. The end.

Wednesday, 13 June 2018

matariki day recount

On Friday it was matariki day and I choose the cooking group. Let me tell you the story of matariki day on 2018 started in room 9 and 10. When miss west could my name out to go to the staff I felt nervous. When I went inside there were 17 girls in my group and only 3 boys I fuot I was the only boy in the group. The first thing I did is make fruit kabobs it look so yummy. Then I made chocolate chips cookies I really like the Cooke and when morning tea started we get to eat what we made but when it was finish we made more cookies and chocolate cake and fruit kabob in the afternoon we went to the hall to show what we made. And we get to take home what we made and when school finish I get to eat pizza and the food I made. The end,.

Wednesday, 6 June 2018

sam and charlie love pudding

just kidding

the bucket



in a far far farm the farm animals and the farmer were in peace. But one day there was a war usa vs the chinese rebels. The farm animals made it out of the war but the farmer did not. Then they begin to look for there new home. But something was in there the rebels was every were the us army lost the war. Some of the were kept as prisoners will some run away and 100 die the animal fort they were not gonna make it. But they kept on moving. When they look up the rebels were dropping missile on the ground. Then they climb onto this truck all the way to usa. They were still in the truck then the chicken went inside the us bash. Inside the bash the chicken went on a caputa and click something and there was a letter from the us army. The chicken was a hero so the chicken became a us spy chicken along with his farm animals. They were set to rescue the surviving US army and the one that's been in the cang then they fire a missile and they one the war. Then they got a metal for bravery. the end.


Wednesday, 23 May 2018

the legend of the surviving plane.war stared 2 years ago on 2016 may 4th



Begin Writing Here: when I was flying the plane chinese rebels was after me i did the loop but they were still on to me I could not outrun them they were to hard then I saw a old usa bash so I land there and rest for the day. The next day there were 80 of them I went inside and called the us military forces but I did not had anth time so I hide at the back of the desk the I find a secret door then I find a old us plane it had guns then I flo into the sky I shot a of the planes but then a misal shot at the back of my plane then I crash it to on a island. I woke up and I fike about a of the people the believe in me the us military force I fike of my brother and my mum and dad then I said to myself to never give up so I builded a plane with a the mental I can find when I test it fly then I went to the chinese rebels and shot there tanks and planes and there rebels then 50 us planes come and fired a boom and it was mission complete.


                            

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