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Monday 29 March 2021

Writing story task



(introduction) It was june the 7th 1996. There have been reports of a large left over from an unknown creature. A special operation group and a couple of scientists were sent to the area where it was first spotted. “C’mon get us there already” the leader of the team said to the pilot. His name is Captain burns. He doesn’t have that much patience sometimes but he's good at taking charge and leading people. He has a scare on his face, but no one knows how he got it. People say him and his old fire team were attacked by a pack of tigers in a jungle when they were sleeping rumours say him and 1 other dude survived. But let me introduce myself before continuing the story. My name is Nate pierce. Being in the military runs in the family for me. The 3 other guys in my team are my buds, We've been friends since we all enlisted in the military in 1991. There is doug. Doug is our heavy soldier who carries his own heavy equipment, like a grenade launcher to a LMG (light machine gun). Then there's jacob. He's our stealthy kinda guy you know. Our sniper and watcher. And lastly there's Richard. He's our support and medic. He carries all the equipment we need if we get wounded and if we run out of ammo.

(arriving at the location) 2 hours past and we finally arrived at the location where the large boney carcass of a creature was spotted. Once the team and the scientist landed we were told that there might be some hostiles coming for the dead creatures' remains. Me and the captain walked around to check if nobody who wasn’t authorised to come was around. The others took a long look at the larger creature's remains. Doug seemed quite shakened that there might be something that large on this earth. The creature remains the size of over 100 Boeing B-52H bombers. The scientist started exploring. Doug and captain Burns started exploring with them, me, jacob and richard stayed behind to keep an eye out. An 1 hour has passed and Doug, captain burns and the scientist group hasn’t come back yet. (meanwhile) “this place his hella big’ said doug. Captain Burns took a look at him, he still seemed a bit shaken by the fact there might be another of these creatures around the world. Captain Burns put his hand on Doug's shoulder and said “calm down i doubt there might be another of these things” there were inside of the bones and there was enough room to fit a tank in here. Then they heard a loud echo in front of them. Captain Burns and Doug stood in front of the scientist. They pointed a flash light then they saw a small looking creature. They saw 1 then 2 then 3 and then more than 40 of them popped out.

(Being attacked) more and more of those creatures started popping up. A second later Captain burns shouted “RUN!” doug and the scientist started running. The small creatures started chasing them there were on top of them on the walls next to them. They had sharp claws and small spikey teeth. Doug stopped for a moment then started shooting grenades at the swarm. So did the captain burns. The scientist kept on running, it was gonna take them a while to get out of there since they traveled so far. 5 minutes have passed of running captain burns and Doug caught up to the scientist. One of the scientists saw something gooey on doug. He asked “WHAT’S THAT ON YOUR SHOULDER”. Before Doug could reply Captain Burns said “IT’S ACID”, Scientist: “ACID?”, Captain Burns: “YES ACID, THOSE THINGS CAN SPIT ACID”. They both took a look at Doug and it looked like he was about to pass out. Seconds later Doug fell to the floor, “It must be the acid” Captain burn said. Captain Burns and one of the scientists lifted up Doug and carried him. Another scientist said that they could see light. A minute passed and they made it out of the creature's remains. The second Richard saw captain burns and the scientist lay Doug down on the ground he rushed over there.

(The attack aftermath) Richard starts doing medical persegers on Doug “HE GOT POISONED AND HIS PULSE is SLOWING DOWN” he yelled. “What can I do to help?” i said, Richard replied with “GO TO THE TENT AND FIND THE BLUE BOX”. I ran to the tent and grabbed the blue box, I rushed out of there and gave it to richard. He got out something that can slow down the poison inside of someone. He applied it to Doug (1 hour later) Richard came out of the tent and said “Doug will survive, but he wont wake up for a while”, Later Richard called a helicopter to come and pick him up. a few more minutes had passed and the helicopter came to pick Doug up and transport him to a hospital. Meanwhile the rest of us had to stay back and continue with the mission. Moments later there was unexplained screaming the fire team went to check it out and out came all those little creatures and that was all the information we knew about what happened to that fire team. Ever since people named the left over of the creature, Mandela






this is the picture i used to write my story, hope you enjoy

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